Wednesday, May 25, 2011

Cupcake story

For writing this week, we have been writing about Making Cupcakes. Today, Paavitr wrote a story about why he likes cupcakes.

7 comments:

Ms Mulrennan said...

Hi Paavitr I enjoyed your story, you read it with a very clear voice. I think cupcakes are yummy.

Sonia said...

I like cupcakes.

Nerilyn said...

Nice cupcakes.

Nerilyn said...

Nice cupcakes.

Nicholas said...

I like how you didn't read your story like a robot.

Miss Mac said...

Hi Paavitr, I saw the cupcakes A2 made and they looked delicious! What did you put on top of the cup cakes?

Unknown said...

You read your story very clearly Paavitr.