Thursday, April 6, 2017

Declan's story

This week, we have been writing about Floods. Declan wrote an amazing story about the time his house was flooded. He wrote 3 sentences, using capital letters and full stops. Listen to his story to find out what happened to his dad's tools.

What did you do when we had heavy rain?


16 comments:

Joseph taupau jt said...

Declan that was the best story ever.

Richard said...

It was cool.

Declan said...

It was amazing.

Joseph said...

I liked the way Declan read his story. He wasn't reading like a robot.

Nadia said...

That was an amazing story. I wanted to watch it again!

Pavan said...

His story was very awesome.

Sahibroop said...

I liked Declan's story.

Freddie said...

I liked the way he read his story.

Mia said...

Declan's story was amazing.

Nathan said...

Declan didn't read like a robot and it was amazing.

harmony said...

i love your story

harmony said...

i love your story

Alison said...

It was a cool story.

Harmony said...

I like your videos it is fun😍😍😍

Harmony said...

You got a cool story

Harmony said...

I like your story it is cool