We are a group of Year 2 children at Papatoetoe East Primary School based in Papatoetoe, Auckland. We will be learning, playing and having fun and we will be posting all this on our blog.
Yesterday Louise wrote a story about looking at different animals. She had 2 different ideas in her story. This is the first time Louise has read her story on our blog. Good Job, Louise!
8 comments:
Mrs Khan
said...
Great story Louise. I like how you read your story in a clear voice. Why did the cow jump in the water?
8 comments:
Great story Louise. I like how you read your story in a clear voice. Why did the cow jump in the water?
I like how you read your story in a clear voice.
That was a nice story.
That was a pretty sound.
Cool voice.
Wow Louise you did a great job reading your story for the first time! Could the cow swim?
The cow jumped in the water because it wanted to have a drink and swim in the water.
Miss Mac, the cow couldn't swim. It just wanted to lay down in the water.
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